<p>YANG Shiyu, male, 16</p><p>Chopin: Etude in G Flat Major, Op. 10, No. 5</p><p>I wish you would seek more variety of color and use more imagination.  Your performance is rather heavy handed.  The ritardando before the return to the opening material is exaggerated if one considers that this piece is short and moves quickly.  This is a good but routine performance.</p>